{"content":{"sharePage":{"page":0,"digests":[{"id":"55367238","dateCreated":"1342076456","smartDate":"Jul 12, 2012","userCreated":{"username":"Patricia_Shiel","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/Patricia_Shiel","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/dfrances353022016.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/55367238"},"dateDigested":1532428982,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Feedback from Ms Shiel","description":"Dear Frances,<br \/>\n<br \/>\nThanks for inviting me to your Wiki! I enjoyed reading your review of 'Terra Firma' and found your comments about the writer's use of an alternating narrative perspective very interesting. You also made some thoughtful comments about the themes explored in the novel and made an effort to compare it to 'The Giver'. I would have liked to hear you say more about how the two novels were different. It also would have been really good to hear a little more about the Project and the nature of the society that the children were escaping from. This would be particularly important for readers of your review who had not read 'Galax-Arena'. B+<br \/>\n<br \/>\nYour poem was sweet and engaging - we've had lots of miserable afternoons recently, haven't we? I liked the way you resolved the story being told with a more positive conclusion. Next time, try to use some more original images and comparisons. <br \/>\n<br \/>\nThanks,<br \/>\n<br \/>\nMs Shiel","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]}],"more":false},"comments":[]},"http":{"code":200,"status":"OK"},"redirectUrl":null,"javascript":null,"notices":{"warning":[],"error":[],"info":[],"success":[]}}